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Mowery said in July 27th, 2008 at 6:37 pm

Great advice. I started learning with a partner, only to have him melt down on me. Then I tried writing comedy solo, but it was taking me forever to get anything written. Now I have found another partner whose opinions I trust, but he’s lacking technically. I feel what he lacks, I make up for, and vice versa. We are both strong in some areas, like social aspects, so we have that locked down, and we have no weaknesses that I can see.

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Benjamin Ray said in July 28th, 2008 at 3:23 pm

Informative article.

Writing partners? I don’t think it’s my cup of tea. But…

But I have been told that my writing (dialouges and action descriptions) fall in the the style of Graphic Novels. Maybe a different form of partnership is what I need.

I would be interested in partnering with a pencil/ink artist.

I do the writing and he or she does the drawings.

I think it’s the same thing.

Regards,
Benjamin Ray
Screenwriter
brscreenwriter@gmail.com
http://www.hollywoodtoronto.com

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Jonny Atlas said in July 28th, 2008 at 10:23 pm

Another insightful post. I had never thought about collaboration from an agent’s point of view. That is some serious food for thought.

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Laura Reyna said in July 30th, 2008 at 11:35 am

Always nice to get a view from an industry insider. Thanks.

PS All these ads on your site are really annoying.

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J. Cotterfield said in July 31st, 2008 at 3:16 am

Curious why you’re anonymous. Here’s another blog by an industry exec who isn’t anonymous http://www.twoadverbs.blogspot.com

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Screenwriting Compass said in July 31st, 2008 at 9:06 am

J. Cotterfield,

I’m anonymous because I can tell you the truth and not worry about the consequences. If you guys knew who I was, I would have to be politically correct, and give you typical bullshit replies. This is better for you, I’m going to give you the real answers…as harsh as it may sound. I don’t have to hold back.

That site you just showed me, he doesn’t blog anymore, and look, he’s a “story editor” at an agency. He’s not an agent…there is a BIG difference there.

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Benjamin Ray said in July 31st, 2008 at 6:32 pm

Hey Screenwriting Compass,

I like your approach.

Looking forward to your answers.

My first question –

I recently read a query letter written by two writers (partners). They used “superbad-like” fast-paced humor in their letter.

Should one put humor in a query letter?

Is this popular?

As for me, I don’t like doing that.

Regards,
Benjamin Ray
http://www.hollywoodtoronto.com

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Screenwriting Compass said in August 2nd, 2008 at 9:50 am

Ben,

If it makes me laugh, then that’s a good query letter, but be careful because it’s very tough to be that funny in one quick line. I have not seen many queries that can accomplish that.

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