5 users responded in this post

Subscribe to this post comment rss or trackback url
mygif
Mowery said in July 22nd, 2008 at 10:36 am

Welcome to my must-read list.

mygif
Lucas said in July 23rd, 2008 at 4:44 pm

Wow, I need to return the books i’ve read and stick to this blog…it’s almost like you are batman for us screenwriters!

mygif
bill said in July 27th, 2008 at 7:07 pm

you seem to have insight that no one is willing to put out there. much appreciated

mygif
Susan P. said in August 4th, 2008 at 12:38 am

I was told when I first moved to screenwriting that new writers have a tendency to write about their own lives (in some manner) in their first screenplay. I think part of the art of being commercially successful may be to find ways to translate those elements to bigger, broader contexts that are topical and exciting.

mygif
FT said in April 15th, 2010 at 6:34 pm

JR
What is that creature you have with you?

TRAMP
A creature? Where exactly?

MR HARLSBURY
My son refers, I think, to the rotting carcass which hangs around your neck, generating such a distinctive aroma.

The Tramp puts down his fork and fondles the rat with the grubby forefingers of his left hand.

TRAMP
This? Why it represents the gradual disintegration of the mind.

JR.
I’m sorry…?

TRAMP
It’s symbolic of humanity’s steady progression towards insanity; neurological oblivion if you like. It was a present from my cousin.

JR.
I don’t…

TRAMP
He lives in Munich.

JR.
I…

MR HARLSBURY
We see. And what profession are you in, sir?

An extract from my screenplay. Commercial, no?

Leave A Reply

 Username (*required)

 Email Address (*private)

 Website (*optional)

Please Note: Comment moderation maybe active so there is no need to resubmit your comments